Pruthvivar cha apla swarga..

Mitrano! Bara ka!! Mala kavita nahi karta yet....

Kavita nasel yett tar kai jhala? chaar olee lihaychya bindhast!
Bhavna man moklya vyakta karai la harkat kai kunachi!?
udya ahey ka koni pahila? He suchana lakshyat thevaichi!
Konala awdo athwa na awdo, shabda julo na julo.... Lihaycha nusta!-----
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"Kavita nahi yett karta mala",
asa sahaj parva mhantli ti"
Aaga prayatna tar kar ki!", mhantle me
"ka tu kamee samaztes swatahala?"

"Arey wa! Omee tu tar sahaj julavlas hey!
udya paryant bagh me tula harvel"
Me haslun mhanto "ho ho! shabdancha khel!
Baghu tari apan, tujha 'udya' kadhi ugovtoy te!"

Ani kharach dusryach diwshi chalu jhali na shabdanchi gaadi!
"A chal jau na apan khadakwaslya la!
Sundar he sandhya kal paha!
Chal uth na Omee,chal tikde! Panyat maru uddi! soduu kagdachi hodi"

Me manta mhantey .."Arey wa! jhale ka ata chalu?"
"A Omee kuthey harvlas tu itkyat,
ahey apan ujun .. punyat!
apan paanyat paahu, suryaasta haalu haalu"

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Galyat tichi mithi..gala la gaal,ticha sparsha swarga bhasav to..
"Aga me eka navin vishwa cha swapnat haravlo"
khud-kini hasun mhanali:"apla lagna,tu,me,ani kiti.. ho??"
"hehe, me jara dusryach vishwat hoto!"

"A kuthla dusra vishwa ata!?"
mithi sodun kambrevar haat...
"kai ahey nakki omee tujha vichar?!?"
Aika ticha chidka prashna, manatla!

"Je vishwa..asel kadhi,ho aplya pruthvi varrach!
jithe saglya garaja, saglanchya ekatra purna apoap hotaat.
noodle aso ka bread ka roti bhaat,
sagyana ghar ani sundar kapde! kharaach!!"

Arshyat tila pahila ki, kiti hai sa wat ta! wah wah!
Tila pahili ki kavita apo ap kagdavar racch te,
mithi sutli thodi shi, ani tichi kavitanchya olee he!
khara tar, majha hach swarga,khush ahey me! ha paha!

"swatahala awdel tech kaam swatahala harvun,
paishe milo na milo! nahi tar nustach nivant asa.
Apan saglyani bandhlela ha pruthvivarcha swarga!
A chalu karu na hyache kaam attapasunach"

Doley harvelele tichey ...shunyat!
Vicharan madhey haravleli, nustich thodishi hasli.
Arechya! kadhi tichi mithi tiney kassli?
Amhi nakkich challo .... swargat!

Aho chalu ahey paaya bandhkaam aplya swargacha,
Tumhala pan amantran amcha
Kai pharak padto nav, gaav kon cha?
Ekach anmol kutumb tumcha - amcha!

"A Omee kitivela majha vishwa asa ankhi sundar banavshil?Arey Vedi hoil me!
Bhetlas temvha, majha haat dharun, prem vyakta kelas temvha, oye hero!
he angthi ......(isshh) , aaj hey swapna dakhavlas themvha! ...Ani ho!
Kavitancha prem majha ayushyacha oleet jemvha bharle tu Omee "

Arey te kahi aso, koni kiti he , kahihi gondhal ghalo
Me ekaach nishkarsha var ahey .. (attaach aalo!)
Tichi ti ghatta mithi ahey majha swarga kharokhar!
Galyat tichi mithi..gala la gaal, aaah...ticha sparsha...!

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feedback please..

me apla ingraji madhyamatla porga ahey...
majha marathi cha tasa thoda kameech sambandha ala...
especially kavitancha...
asach baslya baslya banavleli ke kavita

( mhanjey kavita mhanaicha daring karto me!) hehhehehhee!

kashi watli?
aplyala awadli na?
kuthli goshta awadli,

sanga tar khara mala! :)

dhanyawad!